“Immortal”.

I get up, a huge marble staircase is approaching, I am walking on it higher and higher, so highly breathtaking … But now the room is floating on me and now I’m already standing on the carpet, and in the corner the old woman sits on the bench and the sunlight beats from behind the window and I feel sad and joyfully at the same time … I open it, I open it in front of me, an amazingly beautiful panorama noisy, smelling of dry grass … Sunlight is getting dark, blackness obscures the sun, I try to move away from the window, but the darkness overtakes me in the room, I want to run away, but everything becomes black, objects are blurred and … that? What’s happening?!

Your mother. She found me again. Around it is dark. I stand in the ray of light and hear this familiar whisper from behind ..
– You are nervous?
– Certainly. I always get nervous when you are approaching. – I hope that the dream is already close to completion.
– Calm down. Your life path is over. You have no place here.
– As you can see, I’m still alive. And I’m not going to give up. – Your mother! Time flows! Well, wake up! Wake up!
– I will come for you. And you will understand your mistake.
– First you have to find me. And catch. And until then … all your words are just empty threats.
– A fool. Your games with the law will not lead to anything good.
– I already heard that. And many times. My choice is made. – Damn it when I wake up already?! You need to try to open your eyes, open your eyes.
Giant windows opened in the dark, and gray light poured from them, washing off the images, Rusha obsession, erasing the dream. How. Difficult. Oh Lord! I can’t move … I’m like a fish on the shore. You need to breathe and do not close your eyes. Bite. I hate this moment. So … sleep retreats, I move my finger, now I need to turn over, yes, everything is ok … Damn! I fell to the floor. But finally woke up. At 4:30 hours. Nothing, the car is always at my disposal. I need to drink coffee, because I harvested it yesterday for such a case.
Thermos was in place. This is amazing. A couple of sips from the throat – wonderful. Now I will definitely not fall asleep. The bag has already been prepared, it remains to dress … I’ll take something neutral. Jeans and autumn jacket are suitable almost everywhere. So, you can not turn off the light. I quickly fled down, right to my car, plunged my bag into the trunk, sat behind the wheel. “Life is good!”I assured myself, turning the ignition key.
The house exploded, as soon as I managed to rewind a kilometer.

From whom I am running? I’ll tell you. From the death that I could deceive. I violated the most important law of life – everything should die. But I’m not dead. And I will not die. I am immortal. And I want to stay like that forever. But to do this, I have to deceive death many times … A lot. Infinity.

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TSSS … I write in pale gray in color: in the first paragraph there are a lot of punctuation errors, and some even prevent the understanding of the text. Do not be offended, but, you see, he – the text – lay in the “table” for a long time.

The text was written right before laying out.
The first paragraph was supposed to convey the confusion and unreality of sleep. Therefore, he himself is Sumburen and Kriv from a punctuation point of view.

Immediately the question: he is immortal in terms of the fact that he will not die from old age, or at all?

So, in principle, interesting. But too few details (IMHO). You need more little things!11

Baapche. Until his death is found.

I’ll think about the little things … I don’t like the first-person stories, just my little things slip away, but I will come up with something.

In a dream, his death is only looking for him. He washed away due to the fact that she almost found him through a dream again. She directly wants to meet him.